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Brofiction: SUITORS IN THE SNOW - Toy Soldiers 1

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"Heh, heh, how's it goin', bros? My name is...Pewdiepie! And welcome to...welcome to 'Toy Soldiers'. It's actually another custom story recommended to me by one of you bros, I'm sorry, I can't remember your name....username...whatever! Anyways, I was going to play Cry of Fear tonight, but I love it when I see custom stories about me, so I thought I'd play it first. I'll just read...

"The life in this castle is haunting. Blood is spilled, but payment is still due. You are Felix. You must get in. You must find him. You must find Stephano.

"I've never had to actually save Stephano before, so this should be good! Alright, let's do this! I'm pumped...



"...for this long freakin' loading screen..."



First came the tunnel vision. Second, the sensation of travel. He was leaving the room behind, leaving the lukewarm atmosphere and entering a chilly world of night. A forest path, to be precise. Thick woodland behind, on either side, and a looming castle up ahead. Snow fell in soft waves, making him smile. "Really great mod," he murmured, feet firm on the dirt pathway. "Looks a lot like the Christmas in Amnesia mod me and Flamez3 did." As Felix spoke, he adjusted the large headphones, fitting them over his ears more comfortably. "Alright, systems check."

Both hands curled into fists, clenching hard before relaxing. Grip was good. No lantern as of yet. It would have been a welcome change in the darkness, but that could be amended once in the castle. "Can you bros see?" No reply came, but he could feel them standing at his back, peering over his left shoulder. Yes, they could see perfectly. One last thing...

Raising his right hand, palm open, Felix created a large sweeping arch in the air before him. As if uncovered, his inventory appeared before him, a large solid series of wooden shelving with a cubby for each object. As expected, it was empty. Time itself had paused around him, snow halted in its gentle downward drift. Another sweep and the inventory was banished, darkness where it once stood. Maybe it would have been a good idea to put a coat in his inventory beforehand...

Felix shuddered as thick flakes fell onto his arms and peppered his hair. Yes, a coat would have been wise. "Alright, so I guess we just..."

"Justine?"

Not even the winter air could have chilled Felix the way that voice did. Soft yet hopeful, interlaced with the desperate wheezing of mildew-infested lungs. A Suitor wandering the forest to be precise, somewhere beyond the treeline. The clink of a long worn chain followed every step, each shuddery moan-like gasp for air clenching Felix's heart a little more every second. Long dead branches crackled underfoot like tiny gunshots in the still night of Amnesia.

"Have you come back to your Alois, Justine?"

It took all Felix's strength to remain quiet, treading ever so lightly over the path, working his way to the citadel ahead. Dropped into a custom mod and the monsters already appear...

"Justine?"

Oh, God...had his heart stopped beating all together?


"No...no, not Justine! Pewdie! Pewdiepie!"


"Fuck this!" cried Felix, dropping all acts of calm and quiet the instant he heard his own name. Breaking into a mad dash for safety, the gamer dared not look back as he heard the Suitor's wail of sorrowful hate. Felix's lungs worked on chilled air, panting and whimpering in fear. Snow was kicked up as he ran, breaking free of the forest canopy and dashing through thicker banks of the white fluffy material, not being slowed or startled by the wetness that seeped into his sneakers. He could still hear him, hear his wheezing gasps, chain clanking noisily as he ran.

"No! Leave her alone!"

Felix scrambled up the wide stone steps, hissing sharply in pain as his shin scraped along the edge. It was an easy climb, however, much easier than wading through snow, and the red door up ahead seemed promising. He dashed for it, nearly falling over himself as he pushed it open quite easily and just as quickly slammed it hard behind him. The Suitor rammed shoulder-first into the wood, but it never budged or buckled, a sure sign Felix was safe. The smashing sounds continued though as the Suitor threw himself against the door again and again and again.

"No! No, please! Let me in, let me in, I'm freezing out here...I'm freezing, please...No, just let me...let me in..."

Felix backed away as the voice dimmed, the Suitor moving on blindly, searching for his next victim in the snow. Large hands running through caramel hair, grasping and nervously clenching in the thick locks. "Fuck," he panted, the adrenaline leaving him in tides. "Fucking penis monsters everywhere..." In his retreat, Felix's heel caught against the solid iron of a candelabra, causing the long holder to topple over and clang loudly against the flagstone flooring, echoing, lingering like an unwelcome guest. He jumped anew, shrieking at this new fright, but when that wasn't enough, yelling ensued.

"Fucking....mmmmmghhh! Penis! Why do you insist on these jump scares?"

It was much darker in here than in the forest. Felix could barely see his nose, much less any objects about his person. How was he to find Stephano in this? By now...it seemed hopeless. It was hopeless, but worth a shot.

"Stephano?" he called weakly, almost a whimper. "Stephano, I need you!"

Silence.

Utter silence.

Then...

"Pewdie?"
I finally got enough feeling in my fingers to finish this up!
Pewdiepie plays a new custom mod called Toy Soldiers, in which his only goal is to mysteriously "save Stephano". But how can a tiny gold statue be put in mortal peril? Is this for real, or is someone leading Pewdie into a trap?

Cover art was made by :iconave-sha:

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Nutzeranonym's avatar
i think it's a great idea!!
did you paint the Picture above the heading too?
i hope, there are more parts of it, 'cause i LOVE it, right at the Moment as i read the first word of the heading
(okay, I'm exaggerating again ... after the second paragraph)
but, i really love it!!
*grien*, N.a